I Inherited Empire with Fake Pregnancy Chapter -- Discussion

The story is alright to pass time since it's cute and funny but there are so many plot holes. It could have been better since the story has a certin potential but because of the loss of IQ and sometimes lack of reasons it seems to fail the story.

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For example Corey thought that ML got eaten by boars but beastmen are really good at smelling why don't they get a little suspicious? And the fact that MC could learn a completely new language without going through proper learning really annoys me. He only listens to other people talking for a few days and he gets to speak fluently in complex sentences. It doesn't make sense even if he's a language genius. Another example is ML pretends to have an amnesia. That... seems very childish for the great Mashal. There're tons of better solutions that this

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ML's senior (who becomes a star theif) hated him because 10 years ago a girl who fell for ML confessed and got rejected was sad to the point of almost jumping off the building but this senior forgot that she was a falcon so even she jumped off 10 buildings she wouldn't die. He held grudges for 10 years because of this. Man... maybe the author thought this was supposed to be funny but it really lacks a good reason

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It is very similar to Guide on how to raise your natural enemy but I don't know which author wrote it first.

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