When I Started Working as a Part-Time Housekeeper, I Ended Up Being Liked by the Family of the Most Beautiful Girl in the School Chapter 27 Discussion

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This is a "boy meets girl" story where they grow into a relationship —and nothing in particular to grab your attention.

The character interactions (bar family) feel believable and nice. Head-turning appearance aside, the protagonists feel grounded and without unrealistic flaws or quirks... That's it.

The purported selling point, her family, is cringey. Father, mother and lil' brother almost instanly feel in love with the MC and chapter 16 should've been written way into their relationship. They made me feel "Sir, Ma'am; we've barely met, you're moving too fast.

Perhaps because of that, I felt the story lacks a north and I think is just good for killing time.
 
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