- #1
This story needs blood. The storyline is nothing extraordinary. Details are not fleshed out, the events in the story, and the characters' responses to them are like cliches picked out of script textbooks. The characters are built too taciturn and uncaring, makes it feel as if their world is set underwater where sounds don't travel.The FL is a real salted fish, in terms of the quality of being dried and extra stiff. She has no emotions apart from an overhanging gloom, in short, not interesting. The ML, at this point is not blooming yet, I don't know if he will turn more interesting in the later development, but it does not look to be very promising.