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Chapter 1:This chapter 1 is terrible at making their making the MC the badass MC. It feels like someone tried to make Tanya Degurechaff's backstory but didn't do any of the work to show us how powerful MC is. It just says "the MC is OP, I don't need to show you how they just are.". Still gonna read further to see if it gets any better but so far it feels like the writing is gonna be shallow.Chapter 6:The only way I can reconcile the story so far is if I completely ignore what the title is called. Honestly the MC doesn't feel like they're actually a soldier. It feel like a child thinking what a soldier would be thinking or be like. I called it shallow on chapter 1 but now it just feels completely flat. There's very little if no depth to the story at this point.