The Female Soldier Has Been Told to Infiltrate the Imperial Magic Academy Chapter -- Discussion

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This is a story about a super soldier 15/idk 15+2 year old girl who was originally from japan but reincarnated (minor spoiler->) Spoiler

into an otome game

[collapse] after she uses her knowledge of modern stuff or something she's super strong and is fang wolf legendary military person but her higher up wants her to lead a normal school life but you know shenanigans happens she misinterpreted him and thinks she has to guard everyone at the special school for nobles she'll be going to yadda yadda writing this makes me dispirited cause frankly this story is unfinished not polished boring and maybe couldve been interesting I think it couldve been good read since the setting is cool enough the situation of super soldier does thing but cute girl was niche enough but characters just failed to really get explored, the setting is dogwater when zero effort is put into it, the mc's friend make me think wow I really just dont care and the pacing I hate the pacing argh I cant put into words how awful the pacing is. Also wtf is folias love interest lmao doesnt the author that they made it seem like folia got groomed and then the MC calls the age gap cute like what lol I cant like that right there like cmon pff really? I started to read other reviews to you know to clean up mine and make it a review instead of ranting but all I see is wrong opinions like its ok to disagree with me its only wrong when you express those opinion this stody isnt fun. How could it be fun. I didnt even hear one while reading this smh this is a novel not a band aa lost motivation agajn I came up with a pun but I dont feel like expressing how boring boring this is on side note seriously I dont care if competent FL isn't standard I care if shes an interesting character but lastly is My main issue the MC I guess I wanted something special from her being that shes a mu*der machine or something but yeah shes just there I guess.

i dont recommend to most readers I dont reconmend to people who typically enjoy an Spoiler

otome world

[collapse] I canr in good faith to recommend to anyone besides those who want to imagine a yuri subplot like if thats your thing go crazy

How I Rate------------------

For me this debatebly a 2 but eh feels like 3 in my heart, my experience wasnt pleasant but I was able to read alot of this if it was super bad I would only read 10 chapters

1 star = not even a story

2 stars = a very flawed story with mistakes that cant be excused and unobjectively bad

3 stars= the bare minimum of a story such as dialog plot, rising action, characters, motivations etc. Flaws could be that characters aren't well developed or the setting basically there's something holding the story back but it doesn't have a bunch of those issues/ Boring but no real issue with writing.

4 stars = this is an objectively a good story with interesting dynamics well thought out writing even if the story isn't someones preferred type they can at least recognize it as good writing flaws could be s**ked at the beginning, there's one s*upid character, some plot holes but not a major one.

5 stars = it ti kles all the right spots for me and im biased and think its really good or something/ actual perfect writing like how??
 
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