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The premise of the novel is interesting, but the execution is lacking. The pacing feels too slow and too fast at the same time. One example is how the magical girls were all introduced at the same time, but only Luna has had any significant development. Another example, at the time of writing this, we've been on the same fight scene for 5+ chapters now and which has felt excruciating, but at the same time, random plot points Spoiler
like the second generation of magical girls
[collapse] are just thrown in without proper build up. The author seems to just be throwing ideas at a wall and trying to see what sticks.Doesn't help that there's another yandere-harem-magical girl webnovel out there, that started around the same time as this one, and is being updated at around the same pace that does this whole premise way better.