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Honestly the witch's curse kinda spoils you what will happen later in the story. It's within the first chapter itself so I doubt you'd be missing much even if you read this.She basically curses that MC isn't meant to live longer than the age of 30 and isn't destined to have a child. Even if he has a child it'll be a weak one. And finally he'll end up falling in love with someone that he isn't meant to love (basically his love interest from the enemy).Personally, I don't mind reading tragedy stories like these but starting off your novel with a spoiler is the worst f*cking way to go about it. It's like a movie trailer that tells you how exactly the villain is destined to lose and the hero ends up sacrificing himself. You just lose all the expectations and excitement knowing what the future of the novel holds.
