The Banished Villainess’ Husband Chapter 3 Discussion

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It's ok, I suppose. I would probably rate it 3.5, as it's readable and the translation is pretty good. It's not the highest quality writing, but the plot itself is decently understandable. Conversations with multiple characters can sometimes be difficult to follow as there are no tells for which character said what (eg., no '"blah blah, " the Prince said.').

Details are pretty lacking in general. As of chapter 3, the only character whose appearance was described is the female lead's, and even then it's limited to hair and eye color. Other characters essentially only get a name and their position, if they have one. Ditto for locations, they have very few actual details about them.

If you're a person who likes to visualize the characters and surroundings as you read, this might frustrate you. If you don't tend to do that, I would recommend trying the first two or three chapters and decide if you enjoy it.

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Elana's education also felt weird, considering she should have a lot of knowledge (as the MC notes). Honestly, between the sudden stumble and head-grabbing in the first chapter, and general lack of knowledge later, I'm guessing the FL might have undergone the 'transmigrated' trope or something. Hopefully it would eventually be better explained than just "she doesn't know a lot despite having been going through a queen's training".

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