The Academy’s Time Stop Player Chapter 78 Discussion

  • Thread starter ZodiacZero
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Has potential, but the author ruined it. The Side character can be more developed instead solely focusing on the MC. There is barely any interaction with the side character through out the mc's daily life. The writter instead skipped all that and opted for text like "some time has passed", I mean they can deepen the character and make the reader feel more attached to them, yet instead they are just lazy to do that.

Along with the fact that the translation really need a proofreader, this make this story far more bad read because of the inconsistency in the translation and the shift of POV (as in 1st person & 3rd person)

seriously if the translation are better, it would be bearable to read this thing
 
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