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This is truly a good start.Spoiler
Personally, I believe Noah (What is introduced as the female lead, but ultimately isn't the main character), to be an incredibly good way to make this story more engaging. In fact I would say the story is at it's highest when thing are told from her point of view.
[collapse]This main character starts off as one of the strongest, no time is wasted on training or the like, this can be a downside for some, but that's exactly what I was looking for.The only critique I would have is the cliche romance tropes, which I would argue are unneeded, Spoilerespecially if Noah becomes interested in romance (66 chapters in, she clearly isn't in love).
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