Alsar Chapter 66 Discussion

  • Thread starter CooolFire
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  • #1
The story isn't really that great. The author doesn't know any adjective beside cute. Like hell there's a limit to which readers can tolerate the same description numerous times. The smut was repeated and boring. The ml's description of doing it with other woman before getting together with MC is seriously putted off. The mc's innocence may soon reach the sky.
 
  • #2
I promised I wasn’t going to do this to myself so early in the book, but here I am, hooked again!
 
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