Alsar Chapter 53 Discussion

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This is a series following food and 4P s*x with minimal detail and imagery. The beginning was more interesting since it delved into the fantasy world itself, but the plotline after that just keeps repeating itself. Food, s*x, food, s*x, etc. Like many harem series, the harem members who start out with more distinct personalities all become incredibly flat and spend all of their time whining for the MC's attention and clinging onto him. This is not a romance series but a lust series--they start copulating shortly after meeting each other without taking any time to get to know each other, even though the MC says he only wants to kiss at first. Instead, the MLs go straight to having s*x with him. Everyone is supportive of this relationship without any disagreements or anyone to advise the MC against it, even though he's still unfamiliar with this world and its customs.

A lot of things don't make sense or break away from the plot settings. Why are there sweat pants and jeans in this fantasy medieval world? How is the MC getting all of these ingredients for all of these elaborate meals? How is he able to cook things so well without the proper tools or utensils? Why does one of the harem members wash his hair while still keeping it in a ponytail?

The MC himself is a dumb, naive, Gary Stu who is the best at support magic and cooking. He has the dream appearance that makes him super appealing to both men and women in this world, even though he's so small, it makes them all feel like they're lusting after a child. The term "cute" is used to describe him multiple times in a chapter and becomes annoying pretty quickly.

As for the harem members, one is a sl*t carrying around who-knows-how-many venereal diseases. Another is an ice prince (I kid you not--that is literally his title). The third is a wolf beastman. Even though they all lust for the protagonist at first sight, none of them are virg*ns and all of them have a history of sleeping around. Even the beastman, whose culture treasures finding their other halves (or other fourth in this case), didn't save himself for this person. All three of them are magic swordsmen who all fight the same way and do the same things.

Everything is perfect in this wish-fulfilling fantasy, and there's nothing remotely interesting about it. There isn't much variety or depth at all. Like some other reviewers, I have to agree that reading this series is not recommended. It doesn't have any good points. Even the smut and cooking aren't written well.
 
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