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I can't tell if the MC is dumb or something but he's got literally nothing good bout him. He just apologizes nonstop, looks down on himself. And basically turns into a weak housewife that can heal. There's no reason the other characters should be attracted to him other than him looking cute. The quintessential Mary Sue The love interest literally fall for him at first sight and since he got no personality, when it's the love interests pov, they only say "he's so cute, he's so cute" but not even in an interesting way of writing it.Also the writing is really weak too. The characters constantly talk out loud to themselves and "whisper" about what's on their mind for the world to hear even if it's unnecessary topics like what they're gonna do that day, or what secret scene they got, instead of maybe showing it through other means like actions.Everything in this story feels like kinda forced. Like the father sets our MC up with the guys, the MC is gaslit to think he has to date guys cause he's cute, our MC is given everything he needs, the love is kinda fast and awkward (not the sexy kind), even the love rivals/obstacles feel forced and fast-paced.So far the single smut/masterb scene was pretty boring too. Spoiler
the main character sits in his room touching himself and he's like, I can't get hard trying to top these big people and bc I've been gaslit, let's try imagining being the bottom/being dominated for a guy. And so he jerks himself while spirit-Chris come and whisper in his ear. And not even questioning it, the MC is like, damn that was the best jerkoff in a while. ????
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