Overpowering my OP Wife in Bed Chapter v1 Discussion

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Just the wet fantasies of an immature kid. He writes about a protagonist who deals with the internal affairs of his musculbrain wife's territory.

That being said, the author is a complete ignoramus and the actions of his characters are absolutely insane.

For example, allegedly there are no uniform measurements in the territory. They are part of the empire but close to the border, traders have different calculations why. Anyway, on that note, MC solves everything by... introducing earthly measurements (by eye). Wtf? Why not take the measurements of the empire?

It's like this lack of brain in everything. The initial seizure of three territories in order for his wife to be restored to nobility - the author justifies it with absolutely delusional logic. Like capture forts without massacre - "the border lords will unite if you go on a rampage" - and if you cut off three lords' heads without going on a rampage, then no???? Their heads are their most valuable asset to them, not some people. The author states that ordinary people are being ripped off by taxes and sold into s*avery.

Another moment - it is supposedly legitimate to capture these territories as mercenaries (debatable). In this case, immediately after the capture loudly announced annexation by the Demon Lord. How is this different from a regular army taking over the territory in a political sense?

The third girl just spawned right when the author needed her. The next moment he sees a b00ba blonde with suitable stats for trading - MC immediately offers her father (the head of the guild) to make her his mistress - they quickly complete the case so that the chapter can ends with the protagonist in bed with three girls.

Readable if you turn your brain off, but that's hard to do when the author spends an entire chapter trying to explain ridiculous government stuff (totally implausible).
 
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