- #1
The story started exciting and interesting however it quickly becomes boring. Nothing that happens evokes excitement and that really is a major turnoff. Descriptions are often VERY descriptive thus they can be a chore to read and the characters, although were explored an acceptable amount, I found nothing noteworthy and memorable about them besides their appearance and some of their behavioral tendencies. The main character feels lifeless and gives off an emotionless vibe that is contradicted by his thoughts displaying emotion, more often than not I find myself unable to determine what kind of expression he is making during the various interactions in the story.In short, this story can be interesting however the reader will have to be prepared to sit through slow, excruciatingly painful, and boring sections to be able to experience it. The characters aren't very memorable and the main character is bland.
