I Got a Cheat Ability in a Different World, and Became Extraordinary Even in the Real World (WN) Chapter v3 Discussion

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The beginning does what most novels do, draw in the audience with a premise which has potential. In this case our ugly useless MC gains a fate reversal! Hese now handsome and talented, with a secret of adventuring in another world.

Now we have 2 stories running simultaneously, the boring real word slice of life melodramatic garbage and the interesting other world. To bad the other world progresses in a boring manner. Quite literally, he just meets women who become entranced with him. The actual adventuring is played down while his cheesy beta male interactions are all that gets screen time.
 
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