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The MC is the second son of the first wife of the Baron. Since the father remarried to someone higher in the nobel hierarchy the son is being suppressed. The social standing of Women and Men is supposed to be reversed in this world with woman having multiple male lovers and so on.
Now it might just be me, but in our society there is no polygamist relationship where the men has multiple wives and would allow one of his wifes to stay married to her previous husband. If nobel men can't find a wife if they are over 20 years old, how did the MC's father find a second wife when he was clearly over 20? If woman are in dominant position in this society, why is the man the nobel? Shouldn't it be the woman? Shouldn't all the woman be the only ones in line to inherit a title? Why would the matriarch of the family spend money on a son (the father) who was sold to another woman? Shouldn't he be living with her and the woman of the barony be taking over?
As I stated the basis of the plot is a huge plot hole.
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