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The idea itself is pretty good, the story has nice plot and the world building is decent but the MC ruins it all.He is just so incompitent which ruins the stoeyeires for me, I understand that he has flaws but he is waaaaaay to flawed and lets not forget that he is supposed to be around 30 or late 20 when he died but he act like a 15 year old with tr*sh can instead of brain.The MC is rush and doesn't think before he act and when he DOES think his thinking is just flawed and illogical to the point when you think he has brain damage.Anyhow if you ok with an incompitent MC then the story is actually good and I recommend it.