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Actual score is 3.5There is some big problems, in that case, it's with the MC.The MC who is at heart a good natured guy is fine in itself, and althought I would not call his schemes cunning, they are fairly well done and are good, the plot?for now it's kinda meh.however his emotional status is bad, not bad in a way that "bruh the guy is facing problems it's bad"it's in the way that "why the hell are you even having these sort of problems?", the guy lived in that world for 10 years, experimenting the hardship of male members, however for now, it's clear that he's still treating the world as some sort of game, don't know what to do with his own feelings, and is somewhat of a coward and selfish guy who don't know what to do.Come on, the guy has a stuck mentality of "I'm a mob, so I don't have the right to be standing with the protagonist, how foolish I was..." The way he is treating himself like a inferior guy, who just wants to be lazy, when he is in fact wanting to be with them is just plainly bad, he even is giving excuses to himself now.also, there is some plot holes who are plainly bad.Spoiler
like the cheat itself, how was he able to localizate it?he himself said that he localized the armor throught cordenates, but a thing like this would not be in a game, and even them, how was Olivia able to get it?since it apparently it kinda hates all of humanking for now.
also the way he goes about this is bad "i stole her cheat"seriously?
Why he did not get the item, since he did come to a dungeon with olivia?Marie even got it first, and was not nearly as overpowered as the MC was, using "i was hoping for a growth from these charms" or "bruh I was going to do it latter"is a s*upid reason.
[collapse]Also as a reincarnated person, marie is too dumb, the consequences of her trying to do a reverse harem in a highly hierachal society while only being a low class should be obvious.Talking about hierarchy, this is also one of the problems with the MC."ah I can't be with her, her noble ranking will be high and she is the protagonist""she is of a too high standing I can't be with her" said the guy who hit on the queen of the country, and himself said that he does not want to be involved with the country affair, but does so either way, while he is still sulking on his mentality of a loserMan that does pisses me off, but at least I know that he will get better latter.