Onna Doushi to ka Arienai deshou to Iiharu Onna no ko wo, Hyakunichi kan de Tetteiteki ni Otosu Yuri no Ohanashi Chapter v14 part2 Discussion

  • #1
You have yuri, yuri NSFW bits, and a story told from the point of view of a tsundere. What's not to like?

Well, actually, the NSFW parts do deserve a word of warning. Consent is dubious at best, with all the rationalizations and justifications that are supposed to defuse this. At least once the dominant partner simply runs roughshod over the other's "no" (though the one so treated is ultimately happy with the result). So you have to be able to set that aside. If that's going to be a problem, find another book to read.

That said, there is an interplay between the s*x and the development of the relationship. It's not just fanservice; it's part of how they become a couple. The book would be a different story without those scenes. While some things are not left to the imagination, there are many euphemisms and vague references; it's certainly NSFW, but with some sense of art, and less sense of graphic description.

As stated, the narrator is tsundere. Watching her fall or flip, or go through a lot of dishonesty about her feelings, is part of the fun. But it also requires putting up with her being dishonest with herself, finding ways to lie that she can get away with -- anything not to be found out. Entertaining as this can be, it's a bit like reading a story narrated by a split personality. Suspension of disbelief may be needed here as well.

Finally, be patient with this book. Some things that seem like bad or unrealistic choices early on get explained by the end of the book.
 
You must be logged in to reply here. Register an account to get started.