Murabito Desu Ga Nani Ka? Chapter 6 Discussion

Pretty mediocre

The GOOD:

• The MC plans things.

The BAD:

• Pretty much a wish fulfillment fantasy.
• The writing seems pretty iffy, pacing is erratic. Lots of unneeded exposition.
• MC is pretty inconsiderate, with a bunch of sneakiness and secrets- some of which are unnecessary. Other people suffering is pretty much irrelevant to him (though he eventually 'does the right thing' anyway).Spoiler

  I think he stole the hero's instructor, too...

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• Fight scenes are ridiculous- just list the names of the actions you're doing?

The DIFFERENT:

• Nothing really.

Where it seems to start, and where it major detours for convenient reasons... Eh- it's a story.