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Honestly this is on the better spectrum of Harry Potter fics I've read. Some out there have great potential to be way better but the writer just drops them after 8 chapters. Besides I find it refreshing when the main character is original and not pre-existing characters.My only real issue is that the author doesn't seem to have a strong knowledge in Harry Potter. Ron in the books is actually quite talented far better than almost his entire year. Just he got a hand me down wand from his dead brother. Whose wand has a chance of acknowledging another master is almost zero. [ The author seems to say that a large amount of people saw Sirius black bend the knee to voldy. In the book that was never said he was merely blamed for it cause he's from a purist house. And pettigrew said he did it to everyone.][The author doesn't seem to understand no one thought it was aragog, aragog wasn't big enough to kill someone. They openly thought it was hagrid cause his walking path would have put him at the chambers location, along with supposedly getting caught by Tom Riddle. The author also doesn't understand that he imperious curse yes it controls you he go that right, but once you break out of it there is no residual effect. Also I don't understand if the author knows what a protonus is, they represent either the animal you are closest to but more often then not what you at your heart are. They represent sides of ourselves that we don't understand ourselves. Also the author doesn't understand how am animagus comes to be. I don't remember the whole process but you do need to keep a type of mandrake in your mouth for a month.] All around it's a good story but the author just has some major issues in Harry Potter knowledge.