- #1
Positives:
- Interesting system for 'leveling', and converting things into points is done manually and in an interesting way.
- Pretty good world building/representation.
- Able to keep track of characters... mostly.
- Battles were mostly done right, had some good plot stuff in the background that could have been a story on its own.
- Girls are TOO YOUNG. VERY too young.
- r*pe.
- After r*pe, he is literally CONFUSED on why they are upset. This almost bothered me MORE than him abusing the girls in the first place, his utter lack of EMPATHY combined with how he is supposedly representing all anime nuts out there feels like a direct insult to the target audience.
- Sometimes he spends points like water (No danger? Spend 100, 000!), other times he is arbitrarily stingy (Life threat? Must I spend 1000?). I also get a strong feeling that he has an unlimited list of abilities/skills/items/etc, and he refuses to take a week to read it because he is lazy. It's constant shock: "Oh!? I can instantly learn an awesome spell with a cheep item!? Meh, why buy two of those. Should I look for similar permanent boosts? Nah. Maybe my (girlfriend?) with no skills could use one? Why check.
- I really hate some of the side comments, but I forced myself to ignore them in an effort to give it a good chance to get better. That said, he randomly screams offensive things because he believes that otakus do that, thus it must be funny. Also, he may be brain damaged, as he will routinely ignore life to fantasize about random things, even in important situations.
Honestly, it was the r*pe that made me finally give up. He spent so long supposedly caring for these girls, only to give up all together because they got sad when they found him with another girl. Even after assaulting both of them, he was STUNNED that they were angry! Worse, a few days later, he was CURSING them mentally because they didn't offer up s*x freely after being r*ped. Considered it being tortured.
Honestly, not getting s*x after in a committed relationship? Sounds like marriage. Hey Oh! But yeah, you still are a jerk rapist pedo, fyi MC.
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