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In one sentence "poor translation, decent/generic story (so far) "The story seems rather generic so far, nothing egregious, but it's still early, so I'll wait a bit longer before dropping it.There is one glaring problem though, and that's the inconsistencies regarding names/characters.For example MC is Rai, instructor is Lark. The main character is referred to as Lark constantly. (I.e. "Lark talked with Myra". Lark wasn't there, it was Rai talking with Myra.) Another example is Minna/Mina the waitress and Myra/Myura the elf. After calling her Myra initially, she is then called Mina in every scene since, including the scenes with Mina the waitress, which got confusing.I skimmed the original and it wasn't anywhere near that bad, so it's either a bad Machine translation with bad/zero editing, or a translation with with someone who doesn't speak English as a first language and isn't edited or QC'd.I literally have to read it slow and somethings twice to get what was actually meant to be said.Also for some reason as I was reading it suddenly turned into gibberish. It wasn't just a chapter or two, it was the whole thing, from chapter 1 to 32.I tried translating the gibberish and one paragraph said something about marriage. Then I tried the next and it was gibberish with numbers and symbols mixed in.
