The Camellia Tattoo Chapter 76 Discussion

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Really nice development. Love both the FL and ML. The relationship between them is so nice and sugary.

Though, it sometimes feel like the chapters from the middle may be missing. Their relationship sometimes takes a jump. Alternatively, it can be said that this represents their progress in the unmentioned days.

FLs goals and determination sometimes feels all over the place, at one point to atone for the past, at another to protect her place, next something else. Feels like the regression has affected her deeply.

Minor quips aside, a really good story.
 
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