Tired Of Living As An Omega Chapter 21 Discussion

Up until now, the story seems very interesting. Is a pretty chill read, and gives you more than one POV.

HOWEVER

If there is one thing I have complaints about is the way it is written. I don't know if it's the way the author writes or the translator's, but this story needs some serious editing. There are moments when one of the characters is talking or thinking, and it changes POVs from "I" to "he" or "character thinking's name", so there is some serious inconsistency there.

Aspiring translators, writers and editors, if there's an advice that you need to take into consideration is that, PLEASE review your own work: read it as a reader would, check the spelling, consistency and grammar, because believe it or not, these things could make the difference between a successful novel and something that could have potential, but is an incomprehensible mess.

Aside from this, this novel has been good for now, and is definitely in my priority list of things to read. I hope to see more of it, and if you're looking for a relaxing read with some interesting characters, then give this novel a chance.