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Hard to read, I agree with the comment by peerless: (There are moments when one of the characters is talking or thinking, and it changes POVs from "I" to "he" or "character thinking's name", so there is some serious inconsistency there.) I have to reread some of the chapters because its very confusing. I have to rest because its giving headache. Will give it another chance (09.02.23)