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The story starts out strong but it slowly loses momentum. My biggest complaint has to be MC not keeping up their stubbornness and slowly becoming a pushover. It can be argued that the MC took everyone by surprise at the beginning but it still feels that way.Spoiler
There's also a period in the story where it feels that the author is forcing the MLs into the MC's space without a real reason. That there makes it a little awkward to read as it becomes the driving force of the plot. It's established at the beginning of the plot that the MLs couldn't give two damns about the MC and it's guilt that drives them to him. But that's not enough to keep them on a leash, that's where the awkwardness comes in as a reader.
[collapse]This is a slow burn but it's a weird slow burn that I have to drop. But it's honestly not bad but not my cup of tea.