- #1
The premise of the story is very fun and I really enjoyed the way the protagonist went about figuring out how to "get out of the story" so to speak and find his way in this new life. Particularly the emphasis on how far being rich gets you is incredibly fun. I also enjoyed the way the author pointed out the double standard of how an Omega chasing after an Alpha is perceived vs Alphas chasing after an Omega.However, as others have already pointed it out, the writing style leaves much to be desired. I can deal with confusing translations, I'm more disappointed at the huge cast of characters we immediately get introduced to without getting a particular description of who these characters actually are. This story feels very much like it's still in first draft, more focused on picking up plot beats like bullet points instead of delivering us a setting to go along with it.I've dropped the story for now, I might return to it at a later point.