Tangsain February 19,2025 #1 Ok premise, interesting start, terrible pacing, creativity, sentence structure, character personality design, unnecessary repetition (he was gonna uppercut, he delivered an uppercut) and overall an unenjoyable experience. Reply
Ok premise, interesting start, terrible pacing, creativity, sentence structure, character personality design, unnecessary repetition (he was gonna uppercut, he delivered an uppercut) and overall an unenjoyable experience.