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Hiiii okay so specifically I would rate this 3.5 instead of a 4 but I wouldn’t say it’s a solid 3.following previous review this is honestly a gem. At first though I really didnt want to read it, the writing and the narrating with MC actions were so emo that it really threw me off as I’m really picky with thatBUT I’m glad I stuck on. I knew if the writing got better or at least I settled with it I would like it for its plot. However not only the plot but the MC actions and inner monologue got better and by chapter 40+ she really is a nice character that’s independent, bold and not just a wannabe fake dependent character.there is a weird harem like thing forming though, very very random and unnecessary to me? Makes it really dull and hopefully it’s not something that’ll be some power booster to MC schemes just cause they get a hard core crush... anywaythe link for some reason after chapter 86 is error, fix that please?