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The writing is a little clunky, and as of yet the plot hasn’t picked up too much where our MC is concerned.My only real gripe is that we spend a LOT (just a bit too much) in the perspective of side/tertiary characters.Besides that, I find this to be a very interesting perspective change on ‘vrmmo’ novels, and it makes me exited to see the conflicts between “players”, “NPCs”, and the “Game Dev”!