- #1
I think it's a mix of both the translator and the author's fault, but this story is confusing to read because it's hard to tell who is speaking. POV changes happen in random spots and pronouns get mixed up a lot (which isn't unusual for Mystical Series translations). Other than that, this story is just not my taste because it's too cruel. It's full of psychos, except in this story the characters seem to think that the more psycho you are the better.