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It's a bada** FMC if it's what you're looking for, but I suppose I prefer a cup of more sensibili-tea. I started getting more confused of what FMC was capable of and the writing just states that she can do it. Magic is incongruent because it's unconscious, and many characters just talk themselves into thinking that she's fully aware of what she can do.
For one, FMC instinctively sleep fights when people approach her, but this characteristic is absent later. Two, FMC can have inhuman strength. Usually expressed when she is in a emotionally volatile state. But it's inconsistent when FMC is angry, or subdued. FMC is capable of acting, but for all of it to be an unconscious buff is... Third, the og!FMC is capable of instinctively behaving when she loses focus. While this point is more consistent than others, the fact that there are two triggers: undefined interaction with her sword dog - hugging, looking him in the eyes, etc. AND losing focus or being unconscious - sleep fighting or lost in thought.
[collapse]TDLR; a feels-good story with disregardable character inconsistency.