As Long as You Have the [Shop] Skill, the Dungeonized World Is a Breeze ~The Bullied Youth’s Payback Lifestyle~ Chapter 93 Discussion

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It starts off great for the first arc. The second arc has its moments but then it starts going downhill from there. The ML does not keep a consistent enough character throughout the story. He goes from bloodthirsty to extremely nice to I’ll help you if you can help yourself somewhat to if you pay I’ll do anything. It doesn’t even stay consistent in the same chapter as his mood moves around more than a teenager changes clothes. It’s not even good as an adventure story even though was what the author was going for because it bounces around too much with sometimes no connection between different events. Overall just a slightly below middle of the road story.
 
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