- #1
I can understand why this main character may seem to be a bit of an angsty teen who is trying too hard to be an edgy loner. However, this is still fairly early on in the story. I have not seen the raws so I do not know if the author develops the character in a good direction or not. However, the author has done a decent job of setting up a mentally traumatized character, even if unintentionally. The MC only has sympathy for animals and small children as he judges them to be innocents not yet molded by the cruelty of the world. The fact that he Spoiler
uses his system to gain a loyal animal companion shows that he wants to receive and give affection.
[collapse]Overall the story has not developed its plot much so it loses a star, but the protagonist can be developed in a good direction so 4 stars for potential. (Subject to change obviously should the author drop the ball with this character.)