After Reverse Transmigration, I Became the Four Arch-Enemies’ White Moonlight Chapter 22 Discussion

  • #1
I MTLed all non-VIP chapters and quite liked the story. The ML is yandere, but it's handled well. There are a lot of moments where he is jealous while the MC is flirting with other people out of a desire to lose his v*rginity so that the transmigrator isn't the one who causes his 'first time'. A huge part of the appeal of this story is the ML being super jealous while the MC, unaware of the ML's feelings, flirts/drinks/has fun while he can.

The translator did a good job and I'm happy with the grammar/spelling/etc.

Best of all, this story is complete at less than 100 chapters, so it's not a huge time investment. It's cute and sweet and a total page-turner.

The only thing that annoys me a little is that this story is tagged as both Yaoi and Shounen Ai, which is not possible. Yaoi is BL with smut, while Shounen Ai is BL without smut. A story can't be both. I hope that someone who read the story 'til the end and knows if this contains smut or not could edit the tags and delete one of those two so it's more accurate.

Edit: Someone has fixed the tags and this story is now Shounen Ai only. Thank you, whoever it was.
 
  • #2
This book is so boring and nothing new. The author has 0 creativity! The story revolve around the main character, going to new places to level up, kill all the enemies and move on! The story line is so bad it will shock you for 3days and 3nights! (Often use my the author)
 
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