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It's a little early to pass judgment on the plot, but it seems promising. The translation is easy to read and the translator does a good job of explaining anything ambiguous.Where this has really shone for me is the early-stage smut. There's been one steamy scene (outside of the prologue) in which the ML specifically tells her that if she even seems hesitant he'll back off. He gives her a sneak preview of a couple's marital duties when he becomes aware that she's absolutely clueless about what it means to say she'd bear his heir. It always takes me out of it when the FL hasn't even been kissed before the ML and they go directly to pound town, so even if they don't build it up any more, I like that the author had the FL tune into her desire before the couple officially consummates.
