- #1
The world building and logic to it overall seems a little... flat and full of holes to me so it's hard to get into the story.The author is quite sparse with their words too so it feels like each chapter is short and at the same time, only covers small portions of the events going on, bit by bit. Even when more of the plot is covered, the way it's handled it feels flimsy due to the minuscule amount of words used to address it.I'm not really taken in by any of the characters either because of the above issue. I can't get any feel of depth from anything, which isn't an issue per se but doesn't help in drawing me in. I did skip around the chapters a bit to see if anything changes later, but it doesn't look to be the case.