I Became The Childhood Friend of the Obsessive Second Male Lead Chapter 32 Discussion

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This is a cute and fluffy novel, but it is only cute and fluffy.

There is almost zero effort put on the world building, and the characters are all full of holes and not interesting at all. The main plot of the novel is the slowly developing romance between the dense as a black hole MC and tsundere male lead.

The setting of the novel is very convenient for making the MC a guest in the ml's house, it is trying its best to make the MC a pitiable being, which, it works somewhat. But I honestly wonder why no one kidnapped the princess when she is traveling alone (without guards or servants) to the empire. You would like to think that a vulnerable princess walking out alone would be an easy target for the bandits. Of course, the argument can be made by some brainless idiot that the princess are not valuable because the king (her father) doesn't care about her so she has no value as a ransom, but that also mean that the king does not care after her enough that he would send armies on your a*s when you kidnapped her. Which means you it is extremely easy to get away from the pursuers send your way.

The characters are monotonous and each of them only has one defining trait. The mc's defining trait: dense. The ml's defining trait: tsundere. The duke's defining trait: tsundere. The king's defining trait: a**hole. That's literally what the characters are.

There is also almost zero descriptions for buildings, clothes, and appearance. They will only give you the bare minimum to imagine the outline fo them.

The chapters also ends awkwardly, some chapters should just be connected to form a single chapter instead.

This story is literally the definition of "focus only on the plot, and nothing else.", I guess you can read it if you want some fluffs that you don't want to use your brains to understand.
 
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