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I am 100% sorry for the bad grammar you're about witness. You might not even be able to understand what I'm talking about (English IS my first language)
There are three laws: Don't show fear, The more beautiful it is, the more dangerous it is. S ranks don't love human beings blah blah blah. Other than the first rule, everything has been thrown, They did a year of training and understood that s-ranks are "bad, " that wu dude mocked the pathology researcher on the basis that women are emotional because, ironic, is it based on what's going to happen, both the brother and MC are going to get together with an S class. The Wu dude character switch up was done so badly, wdym he was shedding tears because MC sacrificed himself for him, he didn't shed tears the first time? Its legit been only a few days what can cause such a major character change. The pace is absolutely terrible, how the hell did the "powerful" MC trusts people based on just a few days of knowing each other???
While I do think that Mo Yi is cute, the moment the MC felt sth prick his skin and felt bloodsucking is when I would've shot the creature but no he dismisses his concerns and then continues having that feeling and even feeling euphoric and falls asleep way to deep in a dangerous environment and he still didn't feel anything was wrong?? So much for being a veteran. And then just a few days after he comes back from sacrificing himself, he gets another mission and huge power up wtf.
[collapse]Character = 2/10 (Mo Yi that little creature is solely responsible for that 2) Pacing = 0/10 (Worst pacing I've seen in my life) World Building = 4/10 (The only good thing about but still off-brand Avatar) Mo Yi = 8/10