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The letter seems very good. However, there are things that really annoy me. From minor details like the opportunity to find a cure for cancer in the study of monster regeneration, to more important things.The most doubtful thing is that it seemed that none of the employees had received the necessary training to work in another world. Why didn't they try to prepare them psychologically so that they would at least be less afraid? Why was knowledge about monsters, at least those near the base, optional? Why is their instructor constantly scaring and intimidating them, even though the goal should be the opposite? Why were there no spare wheels in the car? Why didn't they have proper supplies with them? Why was it not checked whether the base was in order before the departure of valuable specialists? Why do they take impressionable people there?It seems that only MC and his brother are classified enough for this work from the group. Otherwise, building the world seems to be good. I hope that what I have listed will be explained as I read, but I have quite a few doubts.If this had actually been explained, then at least one of the characters would have noticed that something was wrong with all this. However, this did not happen.This work is compared to the Little Mushroom, but they are generally on completely different levels from the point of view of the logic of what is happening and basic security. Everything made sense in the Little Mushroom, but here it is impossible to read without completely turning off the brain.However, they have an interesting construction on the same level, but, alas, this work does not seem to be able to justify its own ideas. If the questions I have listed are answered well, I will take back my words, but all the options I can think of only raise even more doubts.