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It's not totally unreadable, and some parts are pretty fun... but there are just so many plot holes, and the MC basically feels like a virg*n JP MC and definitely not like a protagonist-hunting type.The plot holes exist pretty much everywhere in this story. They can generally be ignored when you shut your brain off and enjoy it, but then some incredibly s*upid sh*t happens which overwhelms that ability.Even with that, it still felt overall worth reading for a while. The MC is becoming more and more like a loser JP type though, despite having slept with at least one woman (one explicitly stated, another where I assumed they had until he shows himself as totally brainless later...).Despite saying that he is willing to do whatever for his goal, he ends up not harming a single innocent. He takes a ton of risk to help some randos, and does lots of other really s*upid stuff. For example: literally a chapter after saying he's going to hide his abilities to avoid attention, he shows off in front of a large group of people including cameras that he knows are streaming to at least government.He's incredibly inconsistent when it comes to women as well. He sleeps with someone he doesn't really know without much hesitation, but generally acts like he's never seen a woman before. An example of this BS that made me give up reading more:Spoiler
a woman leaves her great life as ruler of a world to follow him, constantly risking her life just for a chance to see him again. She then kisses him, hugs him often, etc. She even crawls onto the floor to sleep with him when he tries to give her his bed. Soon after, when guys are talking about how hot she is he says there's nothing between them... and is even shocked when he finds out she said they were dating??? He thinks that's just a random excuse to get guys to stop hitting on her.
[collapse]Overall, the start is probably worth reading if you're bored. It definitely goes downhill from there though, so don't expect consistency or good writing quality.