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Right now gave it 3 stars.The story is interesting, though the main reason it is three stars to me is the perspective writing.I don't know if it is the author or translators or what doing it; but the first person then third person is getting ridiculous. It is like, just make up your damn mind about which perspective you want to write from. They go from third person with the supporting characters, which I guess can be understandable. Then they go to third person with lead. Then all of a sudden they go with first person with the lead. Like seriously, that type of immersion is just killing it and is a large pet peeve of mind in narration. Settle on one damn perspective writing and be done with it.