I Am The White Moonlight Of The Paranoid Immortal Chapter 24 Discussion

  • Thread starter Maria
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All right. I’m gonna be honest. I always ready mid chapters and endings to get a rough idea of the story line.

I was pretty intrigued and I started on this novel. I am 24 chapters in.

Folks. This is a slow burn. S-L-O-W.

Spoiler

First kiss was in chapter 70 up.

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I like MC is strong as ML. I do like the storyline. I just find that main couple lacking in chemistry. Feels like a pair of close knit siblings more than lovers.

Spoiler

They get married in the end so I know they are a COUPLE. But can we get a better build on their romance?

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This was a miss for me. I don’t know if I want to continue, but I do get annoyed at not finishing my books. So we’ll see in time to come if I can muster enough brain cells to burn through this one.

No promises.
 
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