- #1
As of time of writing, there are only 6 or so chapters. I'll try to be explicit in my description of what I perceived to be the general idea of the story.Translation and editing: Quality is quite high. No obvious mistakes, and grammar, syntax as well shouldn't be of any particular concern. Doesn't look machine translated, so as long as the person responsible for it is the same, language shouldn't be a drawback. The Tl/editor chose to have certain Japanese terms bracketed so as to more accurately convey their uniqueness.Concept: Well looking at the tags you'd expect a harem work filled with fan service to something semi-p*rnographic, and I'd say that impression seems to be mostly correct. No s*x or harem yet, but expect things to be heavily weighed towards a more s*xual nature. Ah the vistas of the human psyche and a profound understanding of -byologie- and -psykologi-, or, as the author would have it, fascinating events where women suddenly start masturbating uncontrollably upon seeing a penis, and salivating when smelling the "male pheromones" in the air, the rich c*ck musk and whatnot inflaming the s*xual desires of any nearby women. I predict many girls gravitating towards him in the future, the entire plot being centered around him enjoying this incredibly sexually charged world.The author's fetishes for now seem to be quite similar to mine, so obviously a biased review: in this world, the ratio of women to men is astoundingly low. With phrases full of literary vigor such as "Hence, it was inevitable for men to have a predominant position in society. Women were submissive towards men, showing off their cuteness, beauty, and le*dness in order to draw a man's interest" and "[...]the permission to enter the Exclusive Male Zone was a cause for happiness, an honor, and a social status for the women of this world. Of course, the main objective for women here was to marry a superb male and have children with him, " reading this is analogous to reading someone else's masturbatory fanfic; the author being evidently a cis-gender male with a rather clear opinion of how a desirable woman should behave, and her place in society. A stark and honest look at the human condition, a placid and contemplative perspective on a society with wildly different mores and ideologies - this is not that. In fact, when our dear protagonist underwent a physical examination (regular checkup), four women gathered around him, with one of them giving him an enthusiastic handjob, and the others passionately masturbating. This was in a medical context, with the s*xual tones coming out of the blue, with no more justification than that women are extremely h**ny and incredibly easy to satisfy.Oh, and his s**en is apparently of exceptional quality, being graded as very desirable and far better than those of his similarly old males. Expect much pining after his oh so majestic c*ck in the future.This should be seen as one of those R18 novels around here, but definitely one of the better written ones (and fetishistic too. Not content with merely s*x or pe*verted waifus, nay, the author instead envisioned an entire world dipped in perversion and his own little harem desires.) I'm told there's quite a lot of material, so the chapters shouldn't be running out anytime soon. No r*pe apparently, no loli, no NTR (from women of course, men cheating on people isn't much of a concept), not yet any particular sissy behaviour or whatnot, probably a large harem, and women will all be said to have evolved to have exceptionally attractive bodies to attract men.10/10 literary masterpiece. Sartre and Hobbes would have been proud.