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The novel is good, not best but interesting enough to captivate you for a long time, really worth reading. This would have been a 4.5 by me.But what irritate me the most is the bad translation. Hades House did a really good job but they dropped at chapter 36. Yong Library catch it but the MTL is too bad I cant continue to read it.They keep messing up with the pronouns (i/he/she) that it hard to know who is talking about who, you can see they use "she/her" in the first half and address that same character as "he/him" in the later half of a chapter.They also usually leave out like half a chapter making it even more confusing as you try to catch on what is happening.Spoiler
In chapter 15, when Ed wakes Lucy up there the part when Lucy asks for jerky and the part where Ed explain how he knows how to take care of here is completely left out, making the relationship build up too fast, destroying the story flow
[collapse]And finally the layout is just too bad. I have no idea when it change to another character POV or another scene. Double up with the confusing pronouns and content cut, the reading experience is really not smooth and you have to stop occasionally to figure out what you are reading. If not for reading Hades House's translation beforehand, I cant even read this novel as I do not understand anything.Wish someone can recommend me somewhere else to read this novel, I really want to read but the MTL is just so bad.