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It’s a fun read when it’s it’s not bogged down by side characters thoughts. You end up reading the same impressions multiple times- in that way it’s boring and tiresome. It’s not accurate to say the writing is bad or that the author is adding filler- it’s just that he’s over explaining everything either to a dumb audience or the type that needs to know and justify every detail. This is exhausting to read at times, because the pacing is very sluggish.For example, a scene at a camp fire. Add misunderstanding. And then you have to read all the characters involved impressions and thoughts, and then again when a character is explaining themselves to a character not involved. On the low end that’s 3 times and on the high end it’s 8 times you have to read the same shit.In addition you have to read the whole exposition of what characters think of each other every time a scene slightly adjusts their opinion of the other party. For example, getting good marks on an exam after being perceived as talentless. Atleast 6 times you will read “how did I miss judge”, “he’s hardworking” and it’s various variations.This isn’t limited to the MC either, because as you know the romance interests increases and grows more troublesome.The effect of all of this is that something that could be 3 chapters is instead 5. Long term that is 30 into 50. I’m not exaggerating. As more and more characters pour in, the characters have to realize that their initial impressions and assumptions are incorrect and have to spend time figuring out why. Every time. EVERY TIME.If you can suffer reading the same thing atleast 3x then I recommend this for you.