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the idea was interesting in all respects, but the writing is very bad in a sense that foreshadow is litterally just telling you what will happen later on in the novel without being mysterious. Characters are really easy and I'm guessing cause its supposed to be only about the main character. But plot if any is forced and rather than the main character going out and encountering it just so happens to be nearby. Not very good in any case I'd say if your reading it you should just take it as an example of what not to do if your thinking about writing your own story.