- #1
OK, but not good enough for me to bother with the paywall.Spoiler
the MC is still a 12 year old child as of c130. I don't mind that the author writes him as mature, but he writes all of the other child characters as though they were teens or college age, even when they were only six.
also, what kind of parent allows their toddler/ small child to constantly shave his head? What kind of parent would allow a toddler or young child anywhere near a razor? I question the authors experience in this area. Also, I'm not sure why the author said bald=manly, but it did make me laugh when I read it. It was harder to take the MC seriously after that statement.
I realize its not a big deal, it just kept coming to mind since the author mentions his baldness in at least twice in ever chapter
[collapse]giving this a 3 for now. I'll probably change it if/when I can read more of the story.